Monday, 26 May 2014

Still thinking of a title...

Small wonder. I found the attempt of a poem I wrote about a year ago as a submission to the Editorial Board of my school. Of course, I never submitted it. Note my sucky attempt at trying to rhyme. Here goes nothing...Literally :

" Hugs. That warm envelope that engulfs you when overcome by emotion.
  Inspired by wonder, nostalgia, joy, I cannot grasp its notion. 
  So powerful a tool of communication, just one can speak volumes.
  To try and fathom the feelings they convey, I tell you friend is no use.
   I love you, I miss you, I want you, I need you, all sayings balled up in one hug.
   The comfort this envelope offers you, I daresay is more than that of a rug.
   It means so much to a fellow man when you decide to give one
   So bright the aura it gives off, it almost competes with the sun.
   A smile, a laugh, a tear, a pat are nothing a hug compared to.
   Because with hugs its easy to say basically anything all the way through.
   So give someone a hug today, to portray that feeling inside.
   A big bear hug be ready to give, just open your arms up wide."
   The End.

Wow. That's obviously too much premium placed on a hug eh. Talk about emotional.

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